My Deep Diagnosis Gives You:
- A 50% More Extensive Review
- MORE Personal Feedback
- MORE IDEAS that you can implement right now!
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CONGRATS! You already made a great decision to have an internationally respected direct-response advertising professional personally help you boost your response and sales. Now make a good thing even better by DOUBLING the time Drew spends examining your promotion. The more time he has, the more suggestions he can provide and — more importantly — the most detailed his advice can be.
Since you’ve already booked your Checkup, you can add an additional half hour for Drew to review the same promotion… not for an additional $299, but for just $47. You’re getting (at least) one full hour with Drew… a full hour of expert review… expert suggestions… expert ideas from a 37+-year advertising veteran to help you correct mistakes that are crippling your response. It’s an instant savings of $252 in your pocket.
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Upgrade Now to Gain These 3 Big Benefits:
1) MORE PERSONAL ADVICE!
With more time to review your promotion, Drew also has more time to consider the best ways to improve it. This Deep Diagnosis adds an additional 30 minutes to the basic Cashvertising Checkup. Instead of paying $598 for an hour review, you get (at least) an extra half-hour added to your 30-minute review for just $47 more. It’s a win-win for you and your business any way you look at it! (But it’s only available NOW, before Drew begins your review.)
2) MORE USABLE IDEAS!
Drew’s advertising reviews are more than just critiques. That’s because he likes to offer practical, “what-to-do” suggestions and ideas you can start using immediately to boost your response. With an additional 30 minutes — a total of one full hour — he can spend up to the first 30 minutes critiquing and the rest of the time giving you personal suggestions on how to make your advertising better. After all… the more specific suggestions, the better, right?
3) COPY SUGGESTIONS
THAT CAN BOOST YOUR
RESPONSE!
Even though this is a review & critique rather than a copywriting service, Drew can still give you invaluable direction on how to reword some elements for greater impact. For example, if he thinks your headline is “on life support,” he might suggest new words or new positioning to apply. Same with subheads and other major copy elements. Little tweaks to heads and subs alone could result in dramatic improvements to your response!
